Spencer shares this story he wrote about a scary night. Look closely at all of the wonderful transition words he uses to move his story along. Thanks for sharing your work with us Spence!

 

 

A Scary Friday Night
 by Spencer

One Friday night Mitchel, McKinley, and John stayed overnight in Spencer's big camper in the front yard. It was a very dark night. A fall moon lit up the sky. All of a sudden, John said he heard a weird sound coming from outside the camper.

First, Mitchel jumped up and said he would go outside to see what the weird sound was. Next the boys heard loud sounds coming from outside. Mitchel never came back. The boys started to worry. So, McKinley said he was going to check on Mitchel. The boys never came back. Now Spencer and John heard lots of screaming sounds. Finally, John and Spencer ran out of the camper and into the house where they found Mitchel and McKinley. All the boys were relieved to find out that it was Spencer's sister Hailie and her friends trying to scare them.

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