The Castle in the Attic    Cover

    In Mrs. Hoyme's Fourth Grade reading class, the students read The Castle in the Attic by Elizabeth Winthrop. The book is a fantasy tale about ten-year-old William who loves gymnastics and his nanny, Mrs. Phillips. Mrs. Phillips is an elderly woman who has taken care of him since he was a baby.
      One day, William finds out that Mrs. Phillips wants to return to her home and family in England. He tries everything to stop her, but nothing works. The nanny is firm in her decision to leave. Before she goes away, she gives William a toy castle that has been her childhood toy. For years she has been telling him about the old stone and wood model with its drawbridge, moat and finger-high silver knight. And now, it is his.
     One day when William is playing with Sir Simon, the toy knight, it comes alive in his hand! This begins an entire sequence of exciting events. When Mrs. Phillips goes to her bus stop to leave, the strangest thing happened. William miniaturizes her with a medal he received from Sir Simon and she, too, becomes finger-high.
     William has an idea to also make himself small. This idea turns out to be quite an adventure for the ten-year-old as he travels to another land where he must battle to defeat Alastor, the wizard who robbed Sir Simon of his kingdom, and help the knight win back his kingdom. William also wants to regain the respect of Mrs. Phillips.
    The boy successfully defeats Alastor by using his own inner strength and returns to restore Mrs. Phillips to her rightful size (and she returns the favor).
They bid each other a fond farewell with Mrs. Phillips aware that her job of raising William is done and with William newly aware of his skills.

 

 

 
     During our study of this book, we learned many new vocabulary words. We also completed a number of "grid projects" - choice assignments from a menu activities. Here are just a few of our projects.
 

 

Write a main events chart for this book using the "Castle in the Attic Main Events" form. Be sure to write complete sentences. Skip lines between each event.

The Castle in the Attic Main Events Chart
By Luke

Mrs. Phillip's, William's nanny, is moving back to England.

William took Mrs. Phillip's pin and picture that she wanted to be buried with.

William met Sir Simon when he came to life in William's hands.

Sir Simon has a token that can make living things smaller but has to find the other side of the token to return things to normal size again.

William's friend Jason invited himself over and almost saw Sir Simon.

William has Sir Simon shrink Mrs. Phillips.

Mrs. Phillips will not talk to William unless he gets himself shrunk and then Mrs. Phillips would talk with him.

After a lot of thinking William decides to get shrunk and talk to Mrs. Phillips.

William and Sir Simon went on a quest to find Sir Simon's real castle.

In the forest on their quest to  Sir Simon got off the trail and William got through the trail to the other side of the forest.

Sir William stopped to help an old man to get a magic apple. When William got the apple the man took one bit and then threw the apple away,.

The young squire William got into the castle! William is posing as Alastor"s fool.

In Alastor's gallery William finds Sir Simon in lead condition.

William defeats Alastor! Calendar zapped Alastor after William got the necklace.

Sir Simon and the other lead people come back to life!

Together, Tollover and William make their way to William's castle.

William comes with Mrs. Phillips to see his booty, which was Alastor.

William and Mrs. Phillips returns to their normal size.

 

 

The riddle over the castle door told when Sir Simon could go back to reclaim his kingdom. We could choose to create a riddle for a daily event or a special event in our lives. Each line of our riddle was to begin as the lines in the book riddle began.

When the lady doth ply her needle
And the lord his sword doth test,
Then the squire shall cross the drawbridge
And the time will be right for a guest.

 

When the boy opens his presents
And the other boys are watching,
Then the parents have the camera ready
And they will be right for pictures.

By Sean

 

 

When the teacher has taught the lesson
And the kids have done their best,
Then the teacher will hand out the papers
And the time is right for a test.                     

By Shelby

 

 

 

When the alarm clock rings at seven
And the sun is shining bright
Then the bus is leaving my house
And the schoolyard is in sight.

By Zach G.

 

 

William's biggest worry seemed to be
about performing well in his gymnastic meet. Write about a time when you may have been concerned about an upcoming contest, performance, trip or event.

My Biggest Worry

         My biggest worry was when I was going to my cousin's house for one week. I was worried because I am not used to spending the night at somebody's house for a long period of time without my parents. In two or three days, I asked them to take me home because I was homesick. It took 4 hours to get to my house. We got there at about 11:00. Then I was happy to be home.

By Emily

 

 

 

Piano Festival

     Every year I go to a piano festival where you and a judge are in a little room  and you have to play two songs on the piano. You have to have the songs memorized. This always makes me feel quivery and nervous. I also feel exited because every year you try to get 5 points for a superior rating. The judge rates you by superior, excellent, satisfactory, fair, or poor. When you've earned 15 points you get a gold cup.

By Zach G.

 

 

 

 

 

portcullis

Research parts of a castle at

http://www.castles-of-britain.com/castle6.htm

Write a paragraph report for three different parts of a castle You may choose to write about towers, portcullis, dungeons, halls, drawbridge, fireplaces, moats, gatehouses, keep, kitchen, privy, stairs, walls, wells, or windows.

wall towers

Portcullis
By Zach


   A portcullis is a heavy grilled door that dropped vertically down through the slots or guides and most
often protected the entrance of the castle. On the bottom of the portcullis in 208 B.C. If you visit a castle today you can actually see the slots that guide the portcullis

Dungeon
By Zach


     Usually you think a dungeon is used for a prison but interestingly a castles dungeon was not used a

s a prison, rather the dungeon was the great tower. Frequently, the castles prison was located near the main gatehouse to prevent the enemy from gaining access to the inside of the castle.

 

 

Towers
By Zach


     Mural towers were towers built into the castle wall; they were square, rectangular, polygonal round, or D - shaped. Sometimes the basement of the tower was used for as a prison. They also used the tower for a lookout. Often towers had many more than one purpose. These towers could be used for defense, miniature keeps, living spaces, or as a kitchen.
 

 

Portcullis
By Dana

     A portcullis is a very heavy door. The portcullis protects the main entrance of the castle. The portcullis is made of oak and plated with iron. On the bottom of the portcullis, there are spikes. The portcullis is so heavy that sometimes it takes men to lift it up. Most of the time they used a rope to open it up. When the castle was under attack, they dropped the portcullis for safety so no one could enter the castle.

 

Well

By Dana

     The well is a very important part of a castle. It is sometimes built in the basement of a castle. It supplies water to the upper floors. They drink the water that comes from the well. Most of the time a castle has more than one well. Normally a well house will cover the well to keep things from falling in the well. The well is often built near the kitchen.

 

Stairs

By Dana

      The stairs are another important part of a castle. There are two types of stairs in a castle. They are straight flights and spiral flights. The spiral stairs were used to reach the castle towers. The straight walls built by the straight flights of stairs. The earliest stairs were moveable wooden ladders. They usually would rotten easily from bad weather.      

 

     In order to reclaim his kingdom, Sir Simon requires a squire. Write an employment ad for a squire. Include the traits and skills a person would need for the job. For help with your ad, review Sir Simon's rules of conduct on page 98. Use the computer and include at least two clip art pictures in your ad.

Castle Chronicle

Volume 3 Number 2                             March 18, 1512                                   Village Square

Want Ads:

WANTED: ONE SQUIRE

A squire is needed for Sir Simon, preferably 10-12 years old.

 

SKILLS PREFERED:

·       skilled gymnast

·       handy with a dagger                        

·       good horsemanship skills

 

PERSONAL TRAITS:

·       be friendly to others

·       never be shameless

·       cherish and be thankful for the things you have

·       be honest

 

Last but not least you must be willing to do almost anything. Please be ready to go on a quest!

If interested, please go to castle gates. The soldiers will direct you from there. Please be ready to demonstrate these qualities through a challenge that has been prepared for you.

 

 

What do the students in our class say about the book, The Castle in the Attic?

 

Sean wrote:

I enjoyed The Castle in the Attic because it was like you were on an adventure. It used great describing words.

Kelsey wrote:

On a scale of 1 to 10, I'd rate The Castle in the Attic a 9 because I enjoyed listening to all of the interesting parts and all of the interesting characters.

Luke wrote:

My favorite part in The Castle in the Attic was when William did a move hitting Alastor down and then he retrieved the token.

Chad wrote:

My favorite part in The Castle in the Attic was when William went into the forest with Simon. All the noises when he got lost and everything about the forest were also favorites.

Zach G. wrote:

I enjoyed The Castle in the Attic because there was a lot of action in the story.

 

Dana wrote:

On a scale of 1 to 10 I'd rate The Castle in the Attic a 9 because it was a very good book and I enjoyed it a lot.

 
Trever wrote:

On a scale of 1-10, I'd rate The Castle in the Attic a 9 because there was a lot of detail and dialogue. It was a really fun book to read.

Shelby wrote:

My favorite part in The Castle in the Attic was when William fought off the dragon.

 

Emily wrote:

On a scale of 1-10, I'd rate The Castle in the Attic a 9 because the book was full of interesting stuff, especially William and Alastor fighting and William winning.

 

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